Yesterday(hmmmm..), ma'am checked our topic and thesis statement for our term paper. I was very nervous because even if ma'am did accept mine already, I want to change it. When I was researching to have my reference I find my topic complicated, that's why I want to change it. Thanks to my 2 friends they told me it's okay, they explained it to me that it can make up more than 10 pages, I realized it and decided not to change. Ma'am started checking orally first at the back, I have noticed that many of my classmates are having a hard time on their thesis statement, some don't have their own yet, ma'am explained about making a strong thesis statement by comparing it to a banana vendor. If you are selling banana you should not say "I have bananas, they are ripe" it's too descriptive you should say " Don't buy on their stand mine is better" that's what you can defend on. Now I understand thesis statement more clearly, glad ma'am agreed on my topic and thesis statement the second time. (:>)
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i guess i'm only the one who don't have. haha. by the way, is term paper and research paper the same?
ReplyDeleteI'm glad that you have already fixed your mind about your topic and also that you have already understand much about thesis statement. Lucky for you because until now I'm still confused about it. hehehehe
ReplyDeleteGod Bless!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i'm really happy for you sam and i'm also glad that ma'am agreed to your 2nd thesis statement... (",)
ReplyDelete@Jay-R my friend told me that term paper is longer than research paper :)
ReplyDelete@Jay, a term paper is a research paper submitted at the end of a term that is why you call it a term paper.
ReplyDeleteLucky for you, you can expand your term paper into 10 pages. Ma'am told me that mine would require extensive research. Now, I'm starting to doubt if I can really prove my thesis statement. gaaaah... :(
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